I too assumed at first that this was part of childrens' club fantasy life - it certainly sounds like the things I got up to in the clubs I use to run as a kid! And after our big adventure we would always finish with some art to send to the TV show 'Vision On'. Haha!!

But then I realised that these kids you have written about were able to deal with all these monsters! Great story, I really enjoyed it. I think you wrote the children at just the right ages and all having lots of scary, serious, fun adventures!