First of all, I looove your critiques!

*In rough copy I gave more of a description of the Registrar's office, but I felt it was too soon for a tell.

The Registrar's dearie's were meant to be annoying, but not too much so, that you would yes, guess the twist. (although Dante's and Gabriel's was a huge tell)

Yes, teacher's who humiliate special needs kids deserve to be reborn as cockroaches!!!

Thanks Mer, for popping in and reading! I may use you as a beta sometime if you don't mind! DesiLee 😊⛄✌❄🐁🐭